Hospital Room 314

Hospital Room 314
Clanks outside his room
would inspire the old Gandy Dancers’
calls and responses.
When no one is in the room,
the motion-activated towel dispenser
dispenses.
He says when he sits on the toilet,
the woodgrain in the door
resembles a nearly life-size man
sitting on the toilet
watching him sit on the toilet.
checking poking prodding in and out of the room in and out of his veins trying to get him from point A to the much-needed point B
Rest doesn’t come easily.
That tracks.
© Marie Elena Good 2026
© Marie Elena Good 2026
This is in response to our Poetic Blooming’s prompt #598: Write an on track poem. It is also about my husband, who was admitted for an acute attack of pancreatitis.







