Israelite’ish
by Marie Elena
Tell me again
how You parted
the waters
that threatened my soul
to sink.
Remind me
the healings
when reeling
from lie’s ink;
death’s brink.
Retell the hell
from which
you snatched my feet.
Unseat untruth
I tell my past.
I ask, let’s talk
of solid rock
that drenched the earth
and quenched
my thirst.
Recall for me
the blood-soaked tree –
the guarantee
you set me free
from me.
© Marie Elena Good, 2017
Wow! A beautiful rendering and you found a perfect picture for accompaniment. Lovely, Marie!
Thank you so much! That means a lot to me, coming from you.
The setting free from self…oh, man. I feel this. Deep.
This is precisely how I feel. What a good God we serve.
Oh, Marie. This is my favorite thing you have ever written. And you know I LOVE your work. This is just an incredible piece. The quiet prayer of it, the word choices, the way the sounds roll. I am in awe.
Wow. Speechless. Thank you so very much.
Oh, Marie! Chills! This is beautiful.
Thank you so much, Pam. Love to you!
Amen for many of us.