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UNTITLED 17-syllable metaphor

by Marie Elena

You are a lightyear.
I, millions of light seconds,
lined up and waiting.

© Marie Elena Good, 2021

In response to Robert Lee Brewer’s 2021 April PAD Challenge: Day 8 – Writer’s Digest (Day 4: Write a Metaphor poem).

Published: April 8, 2021

Filed Under: Robert Lee Brewer 2021 April PAD

Tags: light year : metaphor : seventeen syllables

2 Comments to “UNTITLED 17-syllable metaphor”

whimsygizmo says:

April 9, 2021 at 7:29 pm

Gah. Perfection.

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- Marie Elena says:
  
  April 10, 2021 at 7:54 am
  
  Thanks so much!
  
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