SILLY LITTLE LOVE POEM (for my Keith)
by Marie Elena
Did you notice
That I noticed
You were noticing me too?
Did your eye
Catch my eye
When I eyed those eyes of blue?
Were you touched
When we touched
Accidentally (if that’s true)?
Did you see
That I sighed
As I saw your soul shine through?
Did you sense
The immense
Magnetism, me to you?
Do you know
You’re loved so,
And I’m glad I said “I do.”
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I like it.Very skilful
Thank you, Katherine!
Ok. Just as long as there isn’t any math involved.
Drat. I posted this in the wrong spot. Back to the DPVPM for me.
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Now people know that for fun, you two go to bars; monkey bars!
😀 !!!!!!!
There is nothing silly about this (except maybe the picture;-) )
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Very nice, Marie. Looks like you’ve got him caged. 😊
Um… just wondering. Should there be a question mark at the end?
Sophie is the one who has him “caged.” Such a great poppa! 😉 Funny you mention the lack of a question mark at the end. I intentionally treated the last “question” as rhetorical, and contemplated treating all of them that way. I decided to treat the last one differently. Since it’s poetry (vs fiction or non-fiction book text), I can get away with that. 😉
Ok, then. Is that what is called “poetic license”? If so, does one have to go to the DMV and pay a fee for it? I’m still in the learning stages, here.
No. It’s free through the DPVPM (Department of Poetry Vocabulary and Punctuation Manipulation). Keep studying, David. You’ll get there.
Ok. Just as long as there isn’t any math involved.