ROCKS, STREAMS, AND STORYTELLERS
by Marie Elena

Photo by Keith R. Good
End-of-life
for those with whom we are particularly close,
seems to bring out who we are at our core.
Some of us are rocks.
Unbreakable.
Pillars.
Feeling the need to hold up all around us.
Or,
perhaps,
we just can’t let our surface crack,
lest we fall to pieces.
Some of us are streams.
We go with the flow,
while staying our course.
Occasionally we pick up others in need,
and carry them along.
But sometimes a stream’s flow
is fashioned from tears
that even a dam can’t contain.
Then some of us are storytellers.
We talk.
We laugh.
We reminisce.
We play familiarity like a piano concerto –
every part by heart.
We connect to those who are listening,
and telling stories of their own.
But can it be that we need to get lost in a story,
because the reality at hand
is too painful to fully embrace?
Let the rocks be strong.
But if they crack,
help them pick up the pieces.
Let the streams flow.
And if the tears run,
let them –
even as God collects
and records each one.
Let the storytellers recount,
and their experiences, count.
And if the present moment breaks them,
hold their pain
as a book in your embrace,
and help them tenderly
turn another page.
© Marie Elena Good, 2018
Even Jesus Himself told stories to connect with others. I love this: We play familiarity like a piano concerto –
every part by heart.
Like families sharing memories of a loved one who has passed.
Thank you for your kind words, Sarah. And so true that even Jesus Himself told stories to connect with others. LOVE that reminder!
The metaphors were perfect. The entire piece was brilliant.
So happy I didn’t miss this.
What made all this so gorgeous was the haunting way you ended this.
Bravo.
Your encouraging comment went into my spam filter for some reason. I’m so glad I caught it and fished it out. Thank you very much, lonely author. Your kind words mean a great deal to me.
Marie, this obviously did come from a deep place of loss, and your heart’s reply to it…. a beautiful, full-of-faith-and-resolve reply.
Such a perfect wielding of your poetic soul.
Thank you so much Damon. Means a great deal to me.
This is so beautiful… and had to come from a hurting place of healthy sorrow
Thank you, Debi. And yes. “… hurting place of healthy sorrow” … wow. That wording strikes me. Thank you for this. This will be my prayer. ❤
Love the rocks, the streams and the storytellers… 💕
❤